Можете, , проверить письмо по dear alina, thank you for the letter! i hope, you are well! and now i'm writing about me and answering your questions. my favorite hobbies are ice skating and learning chinese. i wrote about it in the past letter. also i like making photos. it's very interesting process. i have to find right, new andand beautiful angles and perspectives. by the way, all of my customers like my works. but now i'm only a student and i'm studing photography the second year. what about you? do you have more one hobby? what is it? do you want to arrange a photosession? do you want to be a madel in my photoshoot? i'm looking forward to seeing you! from ann.
надо писать do you have more than one hobby
но так очень хорошее задержанное письмо
2) Do you have more than one.. - больше одного
3) не madel, а model