Составить короткий рассказ на . на примерно так когда я пришёл домой в 7 часов вечера. когда я играл в компютер я услышал что в дверь кто то ломиться и подумал что это маньяк . и вызвал полицию . что вроде такого. только чуть длиньше и с past perfect ом

I came home at 7 in the evening. It was late. After  dinner I went to play computer games. When I was playing I heard that somebody was trying to open the door. I was alone. I remembered that my mother had said to me that she would be at work. I remembered that my father had said to me that he would be at work too. Who was trying to open the door? I thought it was a maniac. I thought he had seen me before  and he knew that I was alone at home and now he was trying to open the door to kill me. I was so afraid. Suddenly the door was opened and I saw my mother. She said that she had called me before but I hadn't answered. My fear had paralyzed me and I hadn't even heard the phone ring.