Проверьте текст (5 класс ) teenage in russia go to school on weekdays. then they do homework . after that teenagers usually go for a walk or surf the net , read books and listen music. somebody after school in for sports or go to a music ,art school .teenagers in russia the some as teenagers in other countries .
во втором предложении добавь do their homework,так лучше.
потом, listen TO music
а последнее предложение вообще неправильное
+ еще в 1ом предложении teenagerS