Исправьте ошибки next birthday i would like to get a puppy.i want this present because i very love animals. i want a puppy was small, with long white fur and short paws. i also want him to have a very funny muzzle: a little nose, like a button, and dark eyes. i will be very glad and happy when i get a puppy. i will play and walk with a puppy and take care of it. i with a puppy become best friends

Ошибки есть. Сейчас укажу: Next birthday I would like to have a puppy. I really want this present, because I love animals. I wants, that a puppy was small, with long white fure and short cute paws, dark eyes and nose, like a button. I will be very happy, if I get the puppy. I will play and walk with a puppy and take care. Me with will be best friends! Конечно, в целом все правильно, но все же ошибки маленькие есть :)