Не was satting inside the bar for about half an hour when he found that a little girl was standing alongside him. «do you know that children under the age of sixteen don't allow to be here? do you see the notice on the door? » the girl shaked her head. he thought that the assistant asked her to leave the place. instead, in a more kindly tone he said: «is there anyone you looking for here? if you stay outside for a while, i'll give you a lift home». he didn't know why he made that offer. вот так правильно, писала по первому комменту, учитель проверил некоторые предложения не правильные.
