Make the sentences shorter , using participles. 3.look at the children who are playing over there! 4.i was doing my homework and i was listening to music when my parents came in . 5. because she spoke good english,she was able to find a job really guickly. 6. the people who are helping us to paint the house are very professional.
I was doing my homework listening to music when my parents came in. She speaking good English was able to find a job really quickly. The people helping us to paint the house are very professional.