Cross out one extra word in each sentence. Usually we have a loads of free time after school.
Sorry, I can't join you, as I've got no of money.
Mary has some vegetables, but she doesn’t have no any fruit.
How less much of that book have you read?
This is the fastest car in the world, that's why it costs a great deal of much money.
It's Monday today, so neither of either the museums is open.
You don't have to go to the shop, we still have a little of milk here.
None of any my friends came to the party last Saturday.
Could I have a bit more enough chocolate, please?

Cross out one extra word in each sentence. Usually we have a loads of free time after school. Sorry, I can't join you, as I've got no of money. Mary has some vegetables, but she doesn’t have no any fruit. How less much of that book have you read? This is the fastest car in the world, that's why it costs a great deal of much money. It's Monday today, so neither of either the museums is open. You don't have to go to the shop, we still have a little of milk here. None of any my friends came to the party last Saturday. Could I have a bit more enough chocolate, please? Explanation: 1. Cross out "a" before "loads" - "loads" is already plural, so no article is needed. 2. Cross out "no" before "of" - using both "no" and "of" together is redundant. 3. Cross out "no" before "any" - using double negatives is grammatically incorrect. 4. Cross out "less" - replace with "much" to form "How much of that book have you read?" 5. Cross out "of" before "much" - using both "of" and "much" together is redundant. 6. Cross out "either" - using "neither of" already implies "either" and is sufficient. 7. Cross out "of" before "milk" - using "of" is unnecessary. 8. Cross out "any" - using "none of" is sufficient. 9. Cross out "enough" before "chocolate" - "more" already indicates enough and is sufficient.